3. Write narratives to develop real or imagined experiences or events using effective technique, well-chosen details, and well-structured event sequences.
c. Use a variety of techniques to sequence events so that they build on one another to create a coherent whole and build toward a particular tone and outcome (e.g., a sense of mystery, suspense, growth, or resolution).
d. Use precise words and phrases, telling details, and sensory language to convey a vivid picture of the experiences, events, setting, and/or characters.
Hell Description
Hell is a place that is miles and miles beneath Earth’s surface, a place that has no exit, once you go in you never go out. Anyone that goes in lives eternally in agony with no mercy. It consists of the most terrifying demons and creatures. Among them, the scariest of them all crawls on its four feet in the entrance of the doors of hell waiting for those condemned souls to make their lives a complete misery.
Hell contains of such powerful like that it blinds you, making it almost as if you’re in darkness. But instead of being pitch black, the only thing you see is bright red. Instead of seeing the flames burn, the only thing you see is the color of the flames. But the light is so bright that it makes you believe that you’re burning completely in fire when in reality there aren't any at all. The light gives off such heat that it makes you feel like you’re burning inside.
The light isn’t the physical torture of the condemned souls, they’re the ones torturing themselves. The light deceives them into thinking that the fire is eating them alive. Because they think that the fire is burning their skin, they begin to tear themselves apart. First they start with their face, they scratch their face until they make themselves bleed. They scratch themselves so hard that their skin comes completely off. Then they work their way down to their arms and to the rest of their body.
At this point, they’re in so much pain that they’re screaming their lungs out. But because hell has such tall walls, they’re so tall that you can’t see the ceiling, it makes an echo. So when you scream it echos back making you think that there is a crowd screaming in your ear. But of course you’re stuck with all the other condemned souls so their screams combine together to sound even louder.
This powerful light deceives them in every way, they think that they’re completely alone when in reality they’re accompanied by all the other sinners. They just can’t see them because this powerful light blinds them to only see the color red. They can’t feel them because the the light gives off such heat that the only thing they feel is the burning, so the pressure of all the crammed bodies combines making them think its the “fire.”
The light is eternally ongoing so they scratch themselves and they bleed eternally. They think that eventually they will bleed out and their pain will end but because they are immortal they will continue to bleed out and feel the pain forever. Because they don’t know that there are millions of bodies crammed together they think that all of everyone's blood is theirs making them go completely insane.
At this point because everyone has been bleeding out it begins to form a stream of blood and because they are crammed together they are unable to move so they end up choking on everyone’s blood. They choke over and over again for the rest of their lives.
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